I decided to do a name change and edit to my new poem.
Still not 100% happy with it, but it is almost there.
Heavenly Scented Summer Breeze.
An unfinished poem
By A.M.Donaghey
Heavenly scented summer breeze, grassy carpet
of outdoor leisure.
On drowsy days of
lemonade, and effervescent pleasure
Dandelions and camomile, stipple through a vale
of green.
Grass with seed and
flower heads, all weighting for a preen.
Taste of sweetness summer fruits, that
tantalize the tongue.
and coolness ice
cubes in your mouth, that almost quench the sun.
Shadows of the summer leaves, swirl and
flicker through the air.
moments, minutes and
hours pass by, and all with out a care
Singing birds and buzzing bees, insects on the
wing.
Dream like in this warmth of light, and
memories that they bring.
How id love to be there now, the childhood
times I treasure.
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